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Flower - for your critique

Postby guru_rb » Sun Feb 07, 2010 2:39 pm

Hi all,

Critique most welcome, especially on lighting.

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Re: Flower - for your critique

Postby Hellwrath » Sun Feb 07, 2010 7:12 pm

Very nice attempt. My critique for lighting would have been to increase the aperture a bit more (like if it is f8, make it f11 or something) as I see the right side of the flowers are a tad overexposed and also to add a reflector on the left of camera to provide the necessary fill for the flowers on the left side as the light fall off is evident and requires a fill.
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Re: Flower - for your critique

Postby guru_rb » Mon Feb 08, 2010 9:49 pm

Hi Veeresh,

Thanks for your comments. The light fall off is intentional. Now that you have mentioned it, I too am feeling that some flowers on right are a little over-exposed. Let me see what can be done about it.
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Re: Flower - for your critique

Postby Hellwrath » Mon Feb 08, 2010 10:09 pm

Guru,

Let me know if you plan to do some flower shoots using strobes. I'd like to join in as well :).
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